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How to write good Resume
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Default How to write good Resume - 07-05-2008

I have prepare my own resume to job and can someone check and complain please what wrong with my resume( I have had few job interview ) and hiring manager say my interview is not correct..

I have provide my my address

Objective
I am looking for position in Banking or Finance Industry or related field

Profile Computer skills including Microsoft Word, Excel, E-mail, and
Strong written communication skills
Excellent Public Speaking Skills and communication skills

Education
University of Boston , Boston MA
Bachelor of Science in Finance
Graduation: May 2001

Courses Finance Accounting Marketing
Managerial Accounting Business Law
Programming Application Income Taxation
Principle of Economics Management
Communications Public Speaking

Skills Microsoft Office proficient include Excel,Words,
Computer and Hardware knowledge include Internet access
Managing company operation and development include
Sales, banking, credit card, mortgage, refinancing, home equity,


Experience: Bank of America 2001-2007

Managing company internal financial operations balance sheet
Mortgage, Refinancing, Home Equity
IRA-Roth-Traditional, 401k include Insurance-Terms and whole
System administration- credit card, credit score, banking
Customer Loans include Student, Private, Home, Payday loan
Advertising and client relations include financial leads
Evaluation of financial market including banking Industry
Trading Stock , Option, Mutual Funds. bonds
   
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Resume critique
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Default Resume critique - 07-05-2008

I thing your resume is good but you have tell your future employer what is your skills, and benefit but you didn't specify what jobs you are seeking!

If I were you first I will change specific goals: what job you looking for what position be specific then on Objective I will say Hard working person.. your attitude..

Sills: you should change those skills as everyone have good communication skills!

Courses: who cares what courses you tool in 2001.. you should put there something else

also good luck on your next resume send me updated version on your resume and I will tell you if it good enough or not..
   
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Bank of America job title?
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Default Bank of America job title? - 07-06-2008

You have manage lot of things in bank of America so you was like financial adviser working for bank of America? because you have mention that you have work on Mortgage , refinancing, home equity as well payday loan look like Mortgage industry.. then you have mention that you have work ( or that your interest) stock market bonds, Mutual Funds.. and then all those credit score, credit card that why I am confused what was your role in Bank of America? what was your job title?
   
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